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for Outside the Potions Classroom

by HappilyJaded

person Jenn
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the smell of lemons.....just a hint mind you. Very nice.
person Maela
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I\'m glad Hemione is so direct. It allows Severus to do the same. I can\'t wait to see how things progress from here. They are right that they have Hadrian to consider so they must proceed with caution. Update soon! ;)
person bella28
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
***le sigh*** More please.
person Amber
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am putting this into my fav section...it doesnt happen often so feel proud...keep it coming and i like that their sons in Huffelpuff!
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good to read from you again! \'Nother terrific chappie! I just love little Hadrian! He is so cute, I could just eat him up! I really liked the beginning. Hot!!! Hope there is more lovin\' to be found soon! And I really enjoy Snape taking on this new role as father! Happy smutty writing, dearie! Tengo que irme ! Salud!
Hugs and kisses!
Killer K :)
person Anguloce
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is quite good! Hadrian is an awesome lil dude. please update soon.
person angel eyes
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter :) i love their son!
person amsev
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read the story so far in one sitting. Poor Severus -- What a load of pain he\'s got to work through. At least he has a terribly intelligent son who has been raised to see life for what it is. What was this about Severus only being able to have one child?
person amsev
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, BTW, I was so engrossed in the story that I didn\'t notice any grammatical or spelling errors! If you continue in this vein you could write the whole thing in pig latin and I wouldn\'t notice, you\'ve got such a good plot going!
person June W
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 13/12 - hey, they didn\'t eat breakfast together! They had a very nice talk, but no food, and he\'s a growing boy (and Severus needed a hangover potion....). I wonder if they can figure out a way around the Snape curse thing and have those three other kids, eventually. I\'m glad Hermione didn\'t rage at Severus - it really was a nasty surprise to spring Harry there at dinner, with Harry\'s accusation that Severus left Hadrian and Hermione. I still hope that Severus and Hermione tell Hadrian the truth, that Severus did NOT abandon them, like Harry thinks. Thanks for the update, and I hope your muse returns with roses and chocolates!