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for Outside the Potions Classroom

by HappilyJaded

person queenp
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this on Ashwinder and was pleasantly surprised to see it so much longer over here....I do so enjoy this story. I stay emotionally involved in the story and want more with every word that I read. Please update again soon!!!!
person sheepy
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cracking story, I only came accross it yesturday and I can\'t wait for you to update, please do so.
person Soul Chaser
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story !! Update soon, please. Keep up the great work.
person ash
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s good to BE back! Especially coming home to more of your stories. I must confess I\'m only reviewing so that I can see how other people are liking your stories, lol. Well you already know what I think anyways, especially about this story. Cause I give better reviews for The Price of Knowledge. There was one thing that kind of threw me off when I was reading it; when Hermione actually admits right away that she was jealous of Severus for giving Hadrian a \"better\" gift. That didn\'t seem all that in-character for her to admit that. I guess I was just expecting an immature reaction out of her. Oh well! :D
person JenKM1216
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! I started reading if on Ashwinder and then found more posted here. I am really looking forward to the next update!
person Katie K
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww another sweet, mushy chapter. *feels all warm and gooey and happy inside*
person June
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 18/17 - I wish Severus hadn\'t felt guilty about Hermione \"having time\" to sew - she still robbed him of eleven years with his son, and let Harry and Ron believe Severus abandoned her and Hadrian. The broom wasn\'t extravagant, considering it\'s his first gift to his son in eleven years - and I\'m sure Harry spent lots of money on Hadrian over the years. Chill out, Hermione!
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not lame at all! I love Beauty and the Beast, one of my favorites! Ah! Who knew snarky ol\' Snape could be such a sweetheart! I absolutely love this story! Please update soon, though, I too, dread the visit with dear ol\' mum! Poor Hermoine, at the witches mercy! I really hope Snape takes up for her and doesn\'t allow his mother to bully her too much. Happy writing, sweetie! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Loyal reader,
Killer K :}
person angel
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i love it and mione gift was great... so what is it was from beaty and the beast it is still great i cant was in till the next chapter in till then keep up the great work and later for now

angel
person Maela
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honestly...I didn\'t think the key to the library was too much of a cliche at all. It was very sweet. :)