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I hope one of the Aurors or Harry come up with a way to detect and defeat the assassin pretty soon.

Good job with correcting the spelling and grammar! Much easier to read now! Keep up the good work!

first of all I want to say that I completely love your story and love your style.......hope your add another chappie soon .............this story going to be a hot one...hehe.....-Cyn

Very, very interesting. I can\'t wait to find out how it will play out. Good luck!

Your story is interesting! You might consider breaking up the dialog of various characters into separate lines. Otherwise, it all tends to run together and it is difficult to differentiate which character is speaking. You might also consider having each chapter run through beta before \"publishing\". There are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors that detract from your otherwise fine story.