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I simply loved these last two chapters.......I wondered how Sandro going to kick some ass......and when Hermione and Ron are going to tell Harry about their relationship......much luck to your next chappie and hope it\'s on it\'s way....-Cyn

You seem to have the basics of a very winning story. There are small grammatical errors, but they can be ironed out in the proofreading. I would advise avioding swearing, scatological, curseing or profane words. The right use of these almost always requires the feel of a native speaker. There is enough difference that I as an American would feel uncomfortable trying to do it in a British story, I would need advice from a native speaker of standard English and vernacular common to the UK. I feel however that your English rendition of an original story is of better quality than the German translation of the HP series put out by the Carlsen Verlag. Keep up the good work.

Hi, just wanted to let you know that your story is brilliant,very readable and I like the addition of your own characters.
It\'s nice not to have to endure plotless smut all the time, though it has it\'s place of course!
Especially good seeing as English is not your first language.(what is your first language, out of interest?)Keep it up!

oic.....i makes much more sense now......no not the dreadful teasers......why!!!!!.....hehe.....waiting for you to update sooner....-Cyn

Teh cruelness! Teh absolute cruelness of how short that was;It is severe!
*waits for Update, like a good little reader >_>*

Hi! I just started reading your fic and I like what I\'m reading so far. Please write soon because I\'m anxious for more!

Thanks for keeping in touch with us. Butt kicking by Sandro but I hope he doesn\'t cause a major character death.

I must say, this is turning out to be a quite interesting story, and i eagerly await your next update like i do the real seventh book. Congrats on making such an interesting plot so far, as well as the well detailed Sex scenes.

Not a bad story, although rushed, specially on the subject of bringing Harry and Ginny back together. The smut was nice.

I really liked the last chapter....the mood and setting was great.....can\'t wait to see what the mysterious shadow has to do.....waiting patiently but anxiously.....-Cyn