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for Harry Potter and the Fortress of Woe

by Mishra

person o.T
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear, if J.K.Rowling dies and all the pre-print of the seventh book burn in a freak chemical fire, you should come up with the seventh book. You\'re an excellent writer and I applaud you. I have noticed that english isn\'t your native language, no problem. If you want I can re-type all of the chapters without spelling mistakes for you. Please reply.

o.T
person MarzBar
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!! Maybe Harry and the Order have a new ally in Sandro. It\'s good news for the white hats that Sandro is pissed off at Voldemort, the Death Eaters and Snape. I am enjoying this story and look forward to updates.
person t
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC!!!!!!!
YOU HAVE TO DO MORE!!!
I HAVE TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS
YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER!!!!
person Cyn
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^.^ i\' m still loving this story...

Keep it up!!
person MarzBar
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your updates. I hope that Harry actually destroyed that Horcrux and wonder what the message is that needs to be translated. I\'ll be looking for more of this story.
person Paul
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap!!!! This is the best story I have ever read on this site. The plot is great. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Cyn
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a great chapter.....hmmmm....fortress of woe.....wondering what it come mean??.......sandro must kick some more ass.....especially if it\'s Snape\'s.......hope to see how Harry handles Ron....hehe.....thats gonna be a good one....hehe....until your next installment....-Cyn
person Saico
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How typical of Ron. ^_^

Well, although it\'s somewhat fast-paced, you\'re certainly making sure we don\'t get bored. The action parts are quite well handled.
person BZLF
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I wonder what Sandro will do now?
person vonHardenberg
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will your story appeal less to your readers of your age group if you omit the Anglo-Saxon obscenities that you have the characters use as exclamations? You have talent and spin an engaging tale, even being very appropriate in the intimate scenes. The vulgarities are not a sin, but do jar the senses of older readers and some younger that don\'t like to hear that kind of language. You willl do what you do, but one of the things that impressed me about JKR is that she allowed her characters to grow without letting them grow coarse. Keep up the story, you are doing well and I will enjoy reading further.