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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this story rocks, i love the way harry escaped, and yea have a shade as a phsedo ally(xuse my spellin) will probly help. and sexy lessons for ron LMAO, although it seemed to pay off. thanks for another great chapter.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good, good. Harrys starting to shape up at last. And a good idea to replace the note with, I take it, a Thought Bottle? Also, you misspelled Diagon Ally, but aside from that, seems to be typo free!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i didn't read it the first time around, but this kicks ass, please update soon!!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i was wondering if you have the completed version posted anywhere?
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Although I now wonder, if Sandro could kill someone via breaking of the neck, in about two seconds, why does he go to the troble of smuggling Harry Potter out of the Castle to that Platform with the Death Eaters? Did they want Harry alive just to kill him themselves? Anyway, I look forward to your next update, and keep up the great work!
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally the Fortress returns! A good long chapter. A good update. Although right after the Fortress of Woe appears and Ron Ginny and Hermione walk out, you said the three seventh years. Should've been two seventh and one sixth year. Anyway, besides that, mostly error free.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another fine chapter this story gets better and better I look forward to the next one bye and thanks.
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for answering my question. Your doing great with these updates, your grammer has vastly inproved from the original. They're also quite long, which is very good. I liked the Potions idea and same goes for Proffesor Diana. Overall I'd still give this a five star rating for each chapter, both for the old version and for your remake of the chapters and story.
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update. I don't remember a Professer Diana last time, but if I do remember correctly, Harry will teach that other lesson for the sixth and seventh years. Good to see an update again and please do update soon!
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're doing a great job so far. Alot better than the original chapters were.
I look forward to your next update.
I look forward to your next update.