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for Harry Potter and the Fortress of Woe

by Mishra

person Arwen_Evenstar
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I read the Child of Tourach, (sorry bout the spelling) a while ago after only eading half of this because it wasn't finished yet, you were reposting it somewhere, but I love how you portray Harry, and the thought of him showing up at his own funeral is awesome. Then there's the power Harry displays, it's totally hot.
Awesome work with this story. Keep writing, because you rock at it!
person Black
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I will soooo complain about editing this storry...
It was one of the best stories I have read on this site, but now that it's edited it has lost all the apeal that it once had.
The capters now seem to be abrupt and impossible to understand. I also miss long descriptions of Harry's training. And the original idea of fortress as a palce of making zombies was much cooler.
Only one thing in this storry seemde to be alright, Sandro, he still seemed to poses the unique aura of old storry.
Is there any chance to publish old storry for peole who liked it better than new one?
Please?
person BZLF
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am deeply sorry that you lost your laptop, and I hope not only will you find it safely, but also that you will do very well on your test. Good luck!
person BZLF
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Superb, it should be said. An excellent chapter and update.
Things are, of course, different now than last when he left for the Fortress of Woe, but it still was just as good ifnot better.
I hope you had a Merry Christmas, and have a Happy New Year!
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!!! im happy for the update, i seriously thought that harry was gonna kill that little j/o . congrats, i still am in love with it.
person BZLF
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way the story is going. Good idea to have Ginny+Ron and Herminone go with Harry instead of him going alone like last time.
I also like the new name you gave the potion Harry takes. Are we going to see anymore PFT lessons with Harry?
person Dorian
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THere are a few gramatical misstakes, but I can live with it.
I don't quite see why they'd make Harry a teacher when there's an auror in the building, but oh well.
I wonder what the fortress of woe is... xD
Now gimme that knut!
person Dorian
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
impressive so far. The voldemort part was particularly good.
person Dorian
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Scary dude, this nightshade.
Excellent name too. xD
person Dorian
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good, good.
One of the better stories I've read and I'm really picky.
I was unsure about the blinking thing first, but then when it was explained further, I liked it.
A new hot professor, eh?
Nice ;)