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I think the story line is great but I like the mystery better. Please post soon.

And yay another chapter! And of course we want you to write more. Harry and Draco goodness, and of course we all want to know who the murderer is. So, this is my review to feed the author and hope tha you\'re full and give us all another chapter ^_^

I had high hopes for this fic from the summary, and from the start (which is well written by the way), but you did not mention anything about het. The summary says \"M/M, Solo, Anal, Oral, Rim, Ship, Lemon\" it does not mention anything about het, yet you have a Ron and Hermione scene (eww) even in the first chapter.

I was deciding to ignore it, hoping that you wouldn\'t continue anything like that again, But then came this:

\"Hermione turned and walked off. Harry couldn’t help himself but follow her sweet ass all the way up to the dorm. Growing hard at the thought of what he could do with that. Ron noticing this, punched Harry in the arm. Apparently he was growing hard himself. They both laughed.\"

Sorry, but that is just wrong. Having Harry lust over Hermione like that is just disgusting, sorry for being biased about that but I have really strong views that Harry should be written as gay in H/D fics. But that\'s my own strong opinion and has nothing to do with your own choices for the fic, so doesn\'t have much place in my critisism.

My main complaint, going back to the start, is that you did not give any warning whatsoever about there being het. I could have avoided this fic in the first place if you had correctly labeled it.

It\'s a shame really, as your writing style was good and I saw nothing wrong with it apart from this. But I\'m afraid I\'ve got no place for the het or Harry \"becoming hard\" from watching Hermione walk. I hope any other works of yours do not follow the same lines, because I\'d really like to read some of your stuff, as it\'s still written well (which is quite a rareity now, to be honest).

HA! i was right! yay for me! *jumps up and down* anyways who is the minister going to deal with he does have a tendancy to blame harry ya know?

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA YOU EVIL PERSON HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME????? HOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NOW I HAVE TO GO AND SLEEP. AND I DONT EVEN KNOW THE ENDING OOOAODFODHFIODHIOAFNWEHGFIOWENG NOT KOOL MAN SO NOT FRIGGIN KOOL.

Well that and i\'m just bored.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANYWAY


So waaaaaaazup........ i\'m like bored otu of my friggin mind right now so BAMN you get another reveiw. Wahoo don\'t u feel special?? Don\'t flatter your watermelons just yet young turtle man... woman... wat is a loin anyway... i mean ... i know where it is... but is it male or female? OR IS IT NEITHER. OMG *runs* HEHEHEHH wow ok i\'m going to leave u alone so that u dont like... have a massive concusion from the weirdness....


bie


oh ps.


dont hurt draco...


pps

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OMG, IF YOU DON\'T UPDATE SOON I\'LL DIE

I just discovered this fic, and am so damn sorry i didn\'t find it before!! GOD! HURRY UP AND UPDATE!! It\'s really early, like 4 am, and i\'m feeling kind of giddy and exhilirated, so sorry if i sound pretty stupid. *rolls eyes* I love this fiction! Simply amazing! PLease hurry! Can\'t wait to see who the murderer is! I dunno...stuck between the obvious (Dean), or the not-so-obvious-but-soething-you-would-do, (Blaise)!!!! If it\'s Draco, and i don\'t know how it possibly could be, that i with rip your intestines out through your mouth and feed them to my dog! Have a nice day! lol.
~Osthrys.

You are evil. That\'s all I have to say. I hope you don\'t intend to leave us hanging for long. I have enough drama in RL.

this is fantastic i can\'t wait till the next chapter and Harry and Draco have time alone *squees at the thought* and i can\'t wait to find out who done the poisoning until you update i\'m going to keep an open mind