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for Feelings and Trust

by avihenda

person Rachel
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and i can\'t wait for the 3er chapter I\'m in love with harry and draco so i only read h/d fics and i can tell this will be a fav fic. thanks for this

xoxo

-Rachel
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re continuing!!!! Yippie!!! Oh poor poor Harry! Draco really sounds like he cares! I can\'t wait for chapter 3! Who are his 5 slaves?
person myniephoenix
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh... update again soon... this one was fantastic.... loving draco\'s worry
person entchen
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice plot! i hope that you wirte more chapters. it would be evil to leave us hanging like this!!
person Aisling
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LUV THIS... and i just realised who wrote it!! HI I HAVENT SPOKEN TO YOU IN AGES!! how are you? anyway.. this is cool!! :D loads of fun... :D really enjoyed it cya xx
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really really must continue! I wanna know what happens next? What happens after they get to wherever Draco lives? Do they talk? Does Draco explain things?
person LadyX
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...I loved it...beautiful...There really isnt much I can say about it..just know that I really liked it.
person myniephoenix
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked the plot... however there were numerous spelling mistakes that were a little distracting... :)
person The doctors In
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seems to be a great start to a story. Why the hurry to post when your readers have to struggle so hard to try to figure out what is being said because of the spelling being so bad. Gosh, I could have waited a day or so or even longer. The problem is when you produce something it represents you and with the written word its hard enough to be understood. And what happens if something comes up for a while and you can\'t get back and fix it. Sometimes you aren\'t always given a second chance on something, and the first time can end up being the only time that your offered
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! You must continue! What happens in chapter 2!