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August 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The 'Ron arc' was a little long, but I think that was mostly due to it being multiple chapters. I really liked the story line though and am sorry that it was never finished.
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update? plz
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is probably one of the best new Harry/Draco stories that I have came across in a good while. Don't worry about the spelling errors, I myself am an awful speller. Though I would like longer chapters and please update soon. Thanks. DN.
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is good but your spelling is pretty bad. You missed "Dumbledore" and easier words like "does". (You spell it 'dose'.) Also: those four chapters you spent with Draco going to see Ron was a complete waist, espically the one where he just walks in the room and studies him. That all should have been one chapter.
Otherwise, it's okay.
Otherwise, it's okay.
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story and I enjoyed reading it. I do hope it continues, many of the H/D Master/Slave stories are usually one-shots or severely incomplete.
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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! Greedy Jacey wants more. *laughs* Seriously. I\'d love if you\'d write more.
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting enough, I\'ll be looking forward to more. One small problem stuck out though. I know this is fanfiction, but be careful not to make too many scenes unecessarily Muggle i..e. bathroom scene probably wouldn\'t have used hands to drain water, and doctors are call healers in the Potter universe. Minor details, but a good job other than that.
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April 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, and I was very happy to find it again, I hope that you\'ll continue soon =)
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April 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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April 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! But what happened to Hermione?? I need to know, I think we all need to know! Who has her? What happened to her????