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for Don't Touch Me

by mistressmeo

person Frank
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this chapter was a little too short, but at least you did update it.I hope hat you can update soon. And do a larger one and with some more action, sex.
Frank
person NAR
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I flipped out for a good five minutes after I realized I missed an update.
It was a bit short for my tastes, but I respect that people have lives. Had it been longer, I think it would have been better. No longer as in dragging that scene out, but exploring more, perhaps showing us more of what Hermione felt or thought before she left him in bed. Perhaps you could have developed a small plot point here?
Still, well done as always, though I winced at the end.
Had you been anyone else, I would have stopped before you tumbled into the cliche: Pansy sussing Hermione out and then so forth, but I trust you to keep it consistant (that sounded like a threat, I assure you it wasn't) to the previous chapters.
Please, email me when you update?
Great job.
person 0o0itznitelite
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW... DAT WUZZZ GOODD... U NEED TO UPDATE MORE/E
person beep
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Hot!!!!!!

I love it. This is moving along perfectly. Please update soon.
person Mel
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This in fantastic...I'm craving your next chapter.
person Jenn
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* Even with a babe at home, you still manage to pull out the hardcore angst and sexual tension. I love it! You are wonderful, my dear, and whenever you post again, I will be ready to read.
person Tandy
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IMPERIO!!!!

OKay, come back here and finish writting this fic!!!!

(REally loving this!! Wow!!!)
person kazfeist
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job, as usual. Keep up the good work! As to the story numbers, they show up in my address bar. Maybe it's a function of Internet Explorer? I dunno :)
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it!! i am hooked!!! update soon!!
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it is great and always look forward to your updates, I am always happy to see the human side of Draco (Yum!) Congratulations on the baby!