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for Don't Touch Me

by mistressmeo

person ~Sakurashope7~
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS A GREAT!!! I\'m glad that they both \"marked\" each other and that Draco felt guilty that he had hurt her so bad. It shows that he has a heart and thats good. I really hope that this story will get some romance in it as well!! Update soon please!!!!
person slychick25877
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow i like it keep going!
person SnowSakura
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BLOODY SEXY!!!! DAMN this is a fantastic fic!!!! Please UPDATE!!!
person Panther Eyes
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, tell you\'re not gonna end it there. if there is more i bet they will shag in a empty classroom at some point.
person JUJI
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was kinda hot. Update!
person Bambu
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, volatile powerplay between these two MM. I particularly liked the conversation at the end of chapter 4... that despite the explosive and strenuous sex the two have it wasn\'t enough, for either of them. They\'ve reached some sort of understanding, very complicated and it\'s almost as if they are air to one another... they need each other to breathe, and you\'ve expressed this feeling so very deftly. I am eager for your next chapter already.
person firewall
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! that was some evening....surely, they can\'t control themselves indefinitely...surely, you will have to write another episode....hmmmm? please????
person michelle
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH..............WOW............I LOVE IT. REALLY HOT.

CHAPTER 4 ROCKS ALONG WITH THE OTHER.
I THINK NEXT...........THEY ARE GOING TO RAVISH EACH OTHER...............IF.............THEY HAVE WILD SEX............AGAIN.

UPDATE REALLY SOON.
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is sooo good. I\'m craving for more!!
person curlyq2713
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh he wants her too!! update soon please! :-D