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for Don't Touch Me

by mistressmeo

person Liz
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still loving your story! You have kept with the characters\' personalities perfectly, which is not an easy task. It\'s still interesting too, which is another plus. I love twists around every corner. Update soon, please!!!
person Melody
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey,
your story is really really good. please don;t take so long to write the next chapter?

person Ashley
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK! This story is amazing! I have never read anything so well written and so hott before in my life! The story line and plot are so unique! Its so refreshing to read a good peace of fanfiction rather than the same old Hermionie/Draco stories. Please keep me informed on any updated chapters if you can. I will be watching, though. This is story pales in comparison to anything I have ever written. Keep up the splendid work!

~Ash
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Even though yousay that you have no idea where this is heading... whatever you are doing is completely BRILLIANT!!!!
I love this story so much. Being one of my favorites.
I\'m a writer and in one of my poems I wrote... \' The passion I feel for you is hatred, yet still a passion I yearn for.\'
I think that completely describes them. To a tee.
They need that hatred. It lights them.
And you totally capture that beyond anything else. And it is so HOT.
Keep it up! One of your fans----
PEACE Isabel
person marajade64
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..another good chapter...looking forward to more:)
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for the next chapter, this is great.
person Michelle
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT CHAPTER! I HOPE U UPDATE SOON. IF, DRACO HURTS HERMIONE HE WILL FILL GUILTY. WILL HE FILL GUITLY IF HE HURTS HER AGIAN? SINCE HE TOOK HIS ANGER ON HER, WILL DO IT AGAIN? I DON\'T THINK IT\'S FAIR CAUSE HE HAS TO GET HURT, TOO; BOTH HAVE TO GET HURT, I THINK IT\'S ONLY FAIR BUT, WILL DRACO PLAY FAIR? NOT LIKELY. UPDATE SOON, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
person lilycat
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew- intense! I love the clash of emotions between the two of them. Both are so conflicted, and together they are SO volatile. Can\'t wait to witness the turnabout. I will be looking for your updates!
person Bambu
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write their volatility very nicely, as well as the fact that they both are fighting the attraction. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
person starr
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! you have to continue, and please finish the story!

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