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for Don't Touch Me

by mistressmeo

person moxie
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Thank you so much for another update! What a hot chapter! Can\'t wait to see what happens after their little nap...
person mione
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you chose now to update as I am bedstricken and this afternoon when I finally reached for my laptop, after finishing my book, I clicked this fic on my favourites list - as I do everyday - with little hope of it being updated. To find that it was made my day (seriously). I did not panic when I thought you had finished it there *looks exceptionally shifty* because I had faith that enough people could persuade you to write more.

Now the effort of writing has made my lightheaded so I close by saying; WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please.
person matizza
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bravo!!!!

i have read your story since it was recomended by non other than the great Raffy from contra-veritas!!!! i love how you play with the characters of draco and hermione... they are so real and in cannon. the plot is just incredible and i love it that you are taking it step by step and molding it as your imagination goes:) please keep up with the excellent job you are one hell of a writer!!!!!

matizza
person Trish
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing, the PERFECT revenge. I can\'t wait to see the next wonderful night, and if he ever makes love to her. You\'re on my Bookmarks =)
person Miki
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely white-hot, raw sexual energy. Loved it!

It\'s terrific that Draco isn\'t a push over (very much in character in my mind).

Hermione\'s experience is a bonus, and gives more depth to her, as Draco is not on virgin territory but must forge his own special memories. (Always the quiet ones, eh?)

I am so looking forward to the moment her fantasy comes true!
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. Thanks again, and hope you\'ll get inspiration to write soon!

Lots of love
person bb
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im loving this story.
person Liz
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg!!!! That was so hot!! More please!!!
person Eddie The Black Maru
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love, Love, Love it!!!!
Much Love
Eddie
person mona
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wonder when he will do it exciting! update please!