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February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I hope you finsh it one day.
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June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
absolutely fantastic. please, please continue. i'm glad i stumbled upon this, but I wish it was finished. very well written. I hope this isn't a WIP that will never be finished.
ps they forgot about a contraceptive charm in the shower scene. I'm not a fan of them having a baby, but a scare might be interesting. might force them to really think about their feelings and where this is all going. just an idea. i'm curious to see what'll happen with pansy if you continue.
ps they forgot about a contraceptive charm in the shower scene. I'm not a fan of them having a baby, but a scare might be interesting. might force them to really think about their feelings and where this is all going. just an idea. i'm curious to see what'll happen with pansy if you continue.
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March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was actually gonna wait to review this story until you wrote another chapter, because I recently found it, and I find it really difficult to review so much material without more or less turning it into a whole essay. So, even though I love your story, and I really do! that was what I decided.
But then something happened, and I thought you'd like to know, because parts of your story just kept popping into my head. The way that sex scene was basically a sex scene/battle; her goading him to take it all out on her; Draco's pain afterwards and when he finally has to go to Hermione for help (the image of him by the fire). This is not something that happens regularly with me, in fact I can't remember the last time it did.
"Angry sex" is not exactly uncommon in the fanficverse or the regular old universe, but the way you write it is just so original, and simply well done, that I can honestly say that you do it better than anyone else I have ever read. So ... well done=) And please write more soon!
But then something happened, and I thought you'd like to know, because parts of your story just kept popping into my head. The way that sex scene was basically a sex scene/battle; her goading him to take it all out on her; Draco's pain afterwards and when he finally has to go to Hermione for help (the image of him by the fire). This is not something that happens regularly with me, in fact I can't remember the last time it did.
"Angry sex" is not exactly uncommon in the fanficverse or the regular old universe, but the way you write it is just so original, and simply well done, that I can honestly say that you do it better than anyone else I have ever read. So ... well done=) And please write more soon!
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please, oh please, oh please come back and finish this story! That was bloody fantastic!
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I hope you update and finish this one. The sex scenes are really hot, and there's a lot going on under the surface. This is fast becoming one of my favorite Dramione stories. Great job!
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story so many times already and I still come back to it. You had it up to this point at CG and no you placed this tenth chapter here. I had to read it again from the beginning. My friends thinks me crazy for reading so many times. I do not care. I hope you will give more of it soon.
Liz
Liz
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story and hope you are able to update soon. :)
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic!!!
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I remember the shower scene, now. Do you think you'll be able to add a bit more to the story? I know how busy toddlers can be. My youngest is eleven, and my oldest will be 21 next month. :D