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for No Longer Helpless

by DB2020

person Hanna Delacour
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that\'s one hell of a cliffie... thats just evil. I am dying for the next chapter. Brilliant as always!
person cleopatra
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are sooo evil!!! Please update quickly! I want to know! Btw, i love your story!
person Jecilia
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo, cliffhanger! The suspense is killing me! I don\'t understand what happened to Hermione, probably because I\'m really slow right now, but I\'m very curious as to what happened to her. This chapter seemed well-thought out. Although, I think Bellatrix could\'ve been more confident and strong, if you know what I mean. Other than that, I love everything so far! Please update soon, but I\'m sure you will since you have been updating frequently, which I appreciate very much. Some authors don\'t update until a month later, but thats besides the point! I do hope you don\'t suddenly decide to end it, I can hardly wait to find out what happened to Hermione. Oh, the vampires joining the army was quite surprising to me, but I should\'ve expected it. Blaine is a wonderful character, by the way. Keep up the great work!
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person angel
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor draco he does not know that will happen when she build up all the magick and black out like that .... i cant wait in till next chapter please update soon and in till then keep up the awesome work ..later for now

angel
person Sunny
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! what a chapter!!!!! this story is so amazin.....I loved how you wrote everything so vividly...I mean I actually felt everything Hermione was feeling...and dang how i hated that Lestrange woman!!!! My goodness you can\'t leave us hanging like that....I mean its an amazing cliff hanger...but I need to know what happens next like now.....I mean I have so many questions...Is Voldy dead?? What the hell happened to Hermione??? and how come everybody and their mamma had to leave???? I felt so sorry for Draco though,....I love this story...and again must say how brilliant you are....please update soon!!!
person notoriousmarm
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... that was an amazing chapter. You have the BEST fic on the site... really, it\'s amazing. keeeep writingggg!
person angel eyes
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter!
person Kristal
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i want the update today!!
not another cliffy! gah! i wanna know what happened to hermione!!!!!
ahh!! hurry up!!!!!! IM BEGGING YOU!!!
\"I DEMAND AN UPDATE!\" hahaha jk but i really want one!
Thnx
Kristal
(emails:))
person cleopatra
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Cliffhanger! Im loving this story - its developing in a very interesting way. Please tell me you have more written and are just waiting to update! Ill be looking!

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