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I just read this story. I can't believe it's your first one! It was fabulous!!! Bravo:)

What a great story, it flowed so well. It was well written and well thought out, I couldn't make myself stop reading it. Thanks for sharing your wonderful imagination with us. It definitly made my day.

wow, that was brilliant! you absolutely *have* to write a sequel, you're a really talented author!

Great Story! ^_^ It was such an original idea that it had me captivated right away. Lol. I loved how Hermione and Draco had to work so closely to each other. :D And the ending definitely screams sequel! I want to know all the tribulations Dramione has to go through...Awesome job!

Wow...just wow. I'm speechlees. I could not stop reading your story, it was captivating. There was an amazing amount of character development and superb writing; and even the few mistakes could be forgiven for they were so trivial and the words so well assembled.

Genius, pure genius!

Speechlessly-that's why I'm typing ;P-Yours

~Aurora

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That was an amazing story. You really have a talent with words. I was so very terrifyed at some parts, heavy-hearted and sad during others, and sometimes unable to contain my laughter and smiles. I originally started reading this fanfic at the mugglenet fanfiction site but then I read that you were going to stop putting your chapters there. I think the reason that your chapters were refused so many times was because at that particular fanfic site I have noticed that in most of the stories there are written in a more raw fsashion. There is often only one plot and there is no..prolonged events. Everything happens one right after another and your writing stlye is more...polished, i think that is an accpetable word to use. Your writing is like that of a novel: you don't rush things and you give more detail to the surroundings and other characters. You also have more than one plot which makes your writing more interesting. To put in plainer: your writing didn't match what they were looking for. But don't take that offensively because I personally believe that is a good thing. I really loved this story and I haven't actually read anything about you as a person but if you haven't already, I think that you should really consider writing a novel of your own. Obviously you won't be able to use this one but I am very sure that you are cable of inventing your own amazing characters and plots. I will keep my eyes open for more fanfiction written by you in the future. Again, thank you for taking the time to write this.

---your devoted reader, cat

I still love this story! I've read it twice now and I think you should write a sequel! Tell us about their 7th yr. How everyone was about their realationship. I'm sure the Slytherins didn't like it, plus all the people who lost loved ones who were death eaters i'm sure want revenge. Anyway, I'd love to see what you do with it! I'll keep an eye out for it!! Thanks!!

that was great! oh please an epilogue if not a sequel, something, anything ,... please!

Absolutely stunning! Couldn\'t stop reading this story--it felt very real and emotional. I hope that a sequel is in the works very soon. I can beta for you, but mainly for flow, spelling, and grammar, not content. The content you provide is wonderful. A great plot because it was so original, and the progress and characterizations were believable. Thank you for posting this awesome story!