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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Give me a U! U! You\'ve got yo U! You\'ve got yo U! Give me a P! P! You\'ve got yo P! You\'ve got yo P! (Please) Give us a DATE! DATE-- when you\'ll Update! when you\'ll update. Update! Update! Update! We demand an update! Yay!
Do you see what the angst is doing to me? It has me in a cheerleading frenzy. How pathetic is that especially when I loathe cheerleaders... ok well not all cheerleaders --just--just the stereotype--cuz I have friends that are cheerleaders... welll nevermind... . Anyway , um, I digress. For someone who is only ( I say only because your skills in story composition, in my opinion (DUH) put you at the level of an established author) an aspiring author you are really talented in plot sequence... You are (excuse the valley girl use of the following word) LIKE a climax genius (no pun intended... ok maybe just a little) and you haven\'t even added the smut. The other stories I\'ve reviewed ( not many beyond a few I assure you) have had an undeniable likeability about them . I mean the situatutions or prompts were original in a sense. The style of writing was definitely hekpful in the scoring department, but none so far have floored me with the plot. UR fic has put me on an emotional roller coaster, one I don\'t want to hve to get off for a lopng,long time ( just joshin bout the long bit--- chuckles). From the introductory scene, to the nail-biting climatics (ex. Hermione\'s run in with the death eaters and the ghoul creature in the basement), to the \"fluffy\" (rather more poofy than fluffy--I mean you can\'t help but go aww at some parts), your fic has seized my attention and has yet to give it back. As a matter of fact, your fic can keep my attention til the end if you so choose to keep em comin ( the chapters that is------me and my unintentional double entendres that make no sense at all) Understand? Probably not. I wouldn\'t if I were you, reading this and you weren\'t me. LOL. I\'m rambling, purposively and unintentionally. It is 1 am afterall.. In short, you rock. BUt please update soon. Must give the props on the 17 chapters you\'ve posted so far. That was pretty quick. I read them all in one sitting. I just couldn\'t stop reading. My eyeballs must have been glued to the screen because everytime I tried to look away they ached. I\'m serious. Time to give the rest of this review page to your other admirers. I just wanted to give you all the appreciation you deserve and more. cheerio.
Do you see what the angst is doing to me? It has me in a cheerleading frenzy. How pathetic is that especially when I loathe cheerleaders... ok well not all cheerleaders --just--just the stereotype--cuz I have friends that are cheerleaders... welll nevermind... . Anyway , um, I digress. For someone who is only ( I say only because your skills in story composition, in my opinion (DUH) put you at the level of an established author) an aspiring author you are really talented in plot sequence... You are (excuse the valley girl use of the following word) LIKE a climax genius (no pun intended... ok maybe just a little) and you haven\'t even added the smut. The other stories I\'ve reviewed ( not many beyond a few I assure you) have had an undeniable likeability about them . I mean the situatutions or prompts were original in a sense. The style of writing was definitely hekpful in the scoring department, but none so far have floored me with the plot. UR fic has put me on an emotional roller coaster, one I don\'t want to hve to get off for a lopng,long time ( just joshin bout the long bit--- chuckles). From the introductory scene, to the nail-biting climatics (ex. Hermione\'s run in with the death eaters and the ghoul creature in the basement), to the \"fluffy\" (rather more poofy than fluffy--I mean you can\'t help but go aww at some parts), your fic has seized my attention and has yet to give it back. As a matter of fact, your fic can keep my attention til the end if you so choose to keep em comin ( the chapters that is------me and my unintentional double entendres that make no sense at all) Understand? Probably not. I wouldn\'t if I were you, reading this and you weren\'t me. LOL. I\'m rambling, purposively and unintentionally. It is 1 am afterall.. In short, you rock. BUt please update soon. Must give the props on the 17 chapters you\'ve posted so far. That was pretty quick. I read them all in one sitting. I just couldn\'t stop reading. My eyeballs must have been glued to the screen because everytime I tried to look away they ached. I\'m serious. Time to give the rest of this review page to your other admirers. I just wanted to give you all the appreciation you deserve and more. cheerio.
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
H\'lo me again. Befoer you knash your teeth in annoyance. I found your original fic in th read only archive, and I was wondering if there was any substantial differences between the two. If there are then just gives me another good excust to read your fic again and again.
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Update! Cliffys are not nice!!! :D
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im soo glad u updated like i said this a great story and one of the better one out there so pleez continue
**no smut yet but iz okay because i love this story**
**no smut yet but iz okay because i love this story**
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness! Please update soon! :D
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is written great im glad u stayed true to the characters nature if u can please continue
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so emotional i loved it u shuld definetly write a sequal to something that great
**u shuld change ur rating**
**u shuld change ur rating**
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im not a big fan of D/Hr but i have to admit im hooked on this story its soo interesting its like reading a novel, please keep writing this story im a big fan and will be looking out for it
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im glad u decided to update...pleeez continue to do so like i said u write well and true to their nature and i luv that
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it so much! Short Sequel please!! =D