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for No Longer Helpless

by DB2020

person Lady Lynn
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, so i have just spent like the last six or seven hours reading this fic and it is now 2 in the ay em and i just wanted to say that it is so fantastic that i can;t think of a proper word, but it might be because im so freakin tired. but yeah, so you shouls most definately do a sequel. pretty please with strawberries on top (i hate cherries)
person Tara
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations!! I absolutely love this story. I've read it many, many times and had waited patiently for you to re-post it. I think you did a wonderful job with the pacing and the believability. The ending's nice, and you definately left room for a sequal...which I am now going to shamelessly BEG for!! PLEASE please PLEASE please do a sequal! I really want to know how Hermione is able to cope with everything now that it's all over. I hope she can forgive herself for the destruction that the unleashing of her powers created, and in time learn to accept them again. I think your story has many wonderful directions that it could take in terms of continuation, and I wait with baited breath for your response as to whether or not that is going to happen. Once again, congratulations on the absolutely wonderful story!!

~Tara =)
person Chavela
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*melts*
Chapter 32 us genius. I about freaked when they made love. AWWWWW! So sweet! Just totally awesome.

PEACE
person Chavela
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
See I jusat found this amazing story the other day, and was bummed when it had not been updated since June, then I got on today, and it was here AND FINISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was so happy! The ending was so great! I loved! I really, really, REALLY hope you continue writing more fanfiction! It was fantastic story, and I really adore it, I wsh there was a favorites section on here so I could pimp how much I LOVE it!

AWESOME story! Totally!

PEACE♥
person LoonyLovegood
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats a wicked story!!!One of the bests i have ever read.But I'm begging you,do not kill Draco or Hermione!or seperate them!!!PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! ♥
person TiffANY
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Since this you
person TiffANY
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had to go through 13 pages (you know what I mean!)
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaawww, no smut! No lemons! ...*goes and sobs in a corner*. Lol. This is really good. It isnt finished yet is it? - anime_obsessed_lover@hotmail.com
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story, you really have a gift for the ebbs and flows of the storytelling!
person Linda Fair
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waiting with baited breathe for chap 29