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for No Longer Helpless

by DB2020

person Anon
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah...a sort of amnesia-ish thingy....how nice...
person Amber
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I really can\'t wait to read more chapters and I normally don\'t get that excited about fan fiction. Very original! Please keep it updated!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I got my wish! I loved this chapter, and I can\'t wait to find out more about the Angelus. Fascinating idea. And as to Draco\'s reasoning... I\'m sure that will make it\'s way out in the end. Can\'t wait for the update!
person slykitten
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
extremely well written, I am interested to see what will happen. Plot is very original, keep it up!
person nique
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is really good. Keep going.
person Krystle
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have never read a story like this before and I think it\'s wonderful. Thanks for another great chapter.
Update Soon Please!
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really well written piece od fiction, but sometimes too much discription can be boring. I found myself skipping parts because somethings were dragged out to much. I do enoy that you write long chapters but they are killed with a lot of filler to make the chapters longer it seems.
person Krystle
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story and I hope you continue writing it. The plot is very original and I can\'t wait for more chapters. Please Update Soon

Thanks, Krystle
person Ibelin_Dragon
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

This is... so different from some of the other stuff showing up on this site.

I like where this is going, and I hope that you continue to update :)