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for No Longer Helpless

by DB2020

person Hanna Delacour
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the last two chapters immensely and I must say the tailing trick from moody was brilliant. I can\'t wait for more!
person slykitten
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Snape is such a dirty old man...lol. Good thing Draco was there. Great chapter!
person Narcissa Black
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco the reluctant hero. Be still my heart. Sleeping in his arms, wearing his clothes, sharing broom rides. If she hadn\'t just lost her parents, I\'d say she was having a hell of a summer.
person pyro
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story. Absolutley wonderful, sweet caring and a bit of sadness- perfect.
person MirrowWolf
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont know what to say......I mean i cant.......I think you have made the most....I mean the best FanFic i have ever read.....And i have read alot.....But clearly this is the most interesting fic i have read. To be correct you wowed me......Please if you dont mined would you update.....please dont make me beg....cause i will if you asked.......
PLLLLEEEEAAAASSSEEEE UUUPPPPPDDDDAAAATTTTEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~ Sincerly MirrrowWolf ~
person sullicn
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far! Please keep it up!
person SnowSakura
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it.......PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^__-
person intcrimgrrl
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Extremely intriguing story - so glad you decided to post, and I can\'t wait to see where it goes -- finding out more about the Angelus, the training Moody has in store, how Ron and Harry will handle it, Draco\'s motivations, etc. There\'s a lot going on here, and I\'m glad I\'m along for the journey.
person slykitten
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loving the newest chapters. I really like how original this story is, can\'t wait until the next part.
person Hanna Delacour
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Laughed so hard. I do hope Hermione comes to her senses though... It\'s part of her allure, although at the moment I imagine she\'s in shock. Please bring back Hermione! Can\'t wait for the update!

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