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for No Longer Helpless

by DB2020

person Lexx
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey... I just want you to know how much I love this story it\'s awesome really! This HAS to be THE BEST fanfiction I have read in a long time! Honestly keep up the good work...
person slykitten
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! Sigh, Draco is such a sweetie, but I love how he is still in character. This story is coming along nicely and I can\'t wait until the next chapter.
person Kirsche
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bada ba ba baaa, I\'m lovin\' it*
That sounded really stupid, but that\'s all I can think of saying in regards to your fic.

I\'m also psyched that you update so frequently.
person elisha
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man! i am sooo in love with this story!!!! please update soon! i was really glad that their attraction was real and not a \"side effect\", i liked how you showed that. MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!! :)
person Krystle
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Darlin,
This story keeps getting better and better, I absolutely love it! Keep up the good work!
person WriterLady1031
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I\'d like to read more if you have it. I love the detail and interaction between the Draco and Hermione as they try to figure each other out. Also, great writing style--it flows so smoothly from one part to the next.

I\'ll be looking out for more, so keep going. ^_^
person Bob Saget
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU FAIL AT LIFE COMPLETELY!!!!!
person intcrimgrrl
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, and am glad you explained what happened in Gringott\'s in this chapter. I have to tell you, however, that the author\'s notes in the middle of the story don\'t add anything and are very distracting. The story is very, very good, but those threw me right out of it each time there was one. They\'re really not necessary in the body of the story - perhaps you could place author\'s notes at the end or the beginning?
person bob
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD!!! THIS STORY ROOOOOOCKS!!!!
sorry I get a little over excited about new things
I think this story is so awesome it puts all others to shame!
The plot is original and the characters are as well portrayd as JK\'s.
And I LOVED the kitten thing! and I still havn\'t read chapter 9 or 10...but I will!! I\'ve just been a little laid up and I wanted to tell you how awesome your story was before I forgot.
And your updateing skills are PHENOMINAL!!! :D
-bob
person slykitten
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how the relationship between Hermione and Draco is forming. Nice and gradual, they dson\'t suddently fall in love. Makes it seem more realistic. Keep up the good work!

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