rate_review Reviews

yeah i didnt like the beginning part of the chapter, too much info for me. I liked the endingthough!

Please update soon

Whoa....that was freaking amazing!!
I can\'t wait for your next update, seeing as how this story is progressing rather fast, I\'m even finding it hard to keep up!! And thats saying something \'cause I hardly ever miss a day of looking on AFF.
I\'ve loved every single chapter that you\'ve come out with since I haven\'t reviewed....the kiss, jump and wings bit was very exceptional.....and Harry and Ron are extremelly clueless....if you hand all information to people on a silver plater, you will never be sure of their comprehesion, clearly this never donned on the boys!
Soooooo...I\'m gonna keep looking at this story right till the end! I hope school goes well for you...and that you will still have time to write, of course :P
keep up the awesome writing
-bob

Another great chapter. I do have a suggestion though. If you go into long description like that try to break up the paragraphs a little better. It\'s easier to read when it\'s broken up, more manageable somehow. Anyway, great chapter, can\'t wait for more. Good luck on your classes.

Well now... I love slimy old men and the boys who love to protect us from them. :) Your story truly is original in its mesh of many fic ideas. You\'ve brought everything together in one coherent story and I\'m loving the wild ride.

Just a quick suggestion - try breaking up your paragraphs a little more often. This last chapter took an effort to read due to the length of passages in the narrative. I know it\'s exposition, but there was so little dialogue that it seemed like an intermission to the rest of the story. I hope this helps because you have the ideas and you\'re already a wonderful writer; I guess it\'s the English teacher in me that wants it tightened. :)

Wow! Great chapter! I am on the edge of my seat... I think you described Harry and Ron perfectly. Of course who knows what the future holds. Can\'t wait for the update!

you can\'t leave it off there!!!!!! What happens next???? Please update soon.

I\'m so curious now! You have to write another one and let us know what\'s going on. lol. Great chapter. I can\'t wait to find out what\'s going on.

I want more.... I guess I\'ll just have to wait. *sigh* Oh well. This is an awesome story.... Keep it up please.

Umm. I want more. please.. I know this review isn\'t helpful.. but i like this story a lot. please keep it going.

I love your story! It\'s got plot, and the kind of slow tension that makes a romance story worth reading. The characters are endearing and realistic. Please, please, please keep it up; I\'m addicted.