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for No Longer Helpless

by DB2020

person RedRose
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. One of the best I've had th epleasure of reading. Very original.
person angela
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i had read this story a few years ago and thought it was amazing. shortly after that i fell out of reading fanfiction and got rid of everything to do with ff. when i did get back into it, i always kept an eye out for your story. i could never find it when i actively searched for it. last week i was randomly reading stories and clicked the link for No Longer Helpless. Three chapters in i realized that No Longer Helpless was the story i had always thought about when it came to fanfiction. i was really lucky to find your story again.

No Longer Helpless is my favorite draco/hermione fanfiction.

any chance for a sequel?
person ml
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A most invigorating and well written story! Will there be a sequel? I really liked Blain! =)
person dinkyjew
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read over 400 stories and this one is my favorit just wow I hope you write more thanks for the read
person xORyanneOx
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I was entranced with how the story was drawn out and the complexities that each of the characters began to reveal. I've always felt that Rowling left a lot out when it came to the personalities of Hermione and Draco, actually even Ron at times, and this explained them all. Sure, Draco was a little fluffy...but it's all in good fun! ^^ I love the Angelus and Bain was ingenius. Good job...nah, Great job!!
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it!
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story, I read it all in one go. I must say I loved Blaine, he was endlessly amusing.
person VelvetB
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Extremely captivating - I had to read it all at once! I love how Draco readily took care of Hermione despite her dual personalities. What made it better was that he loved her for herself and not her 'Angelus' side which everyone else was so obsessed about. The only part I was slightly disappointed about was the ending as it seemed almost rushed. It would have been nice to have intimate dialogue between the adorable couple.
Thank you for such a heart-warming story!
person Monkey Lady
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so wonderful! I've been reading it off and on for about three days now. I love all of the characters and how you portrayed them. I think you kept them fairly in character, except for Draco, but he was SUPPOSED to be different. :) The Angelus idea was a lovely, new idea too. When you made them somewhat related to Veelas, I wondered if it was just going to be another Veela fic (which I love by the way), but it wasn't. :) I completely adore Blain! What a wonderful character! So funny! I thought the plot was great and the love story wonderful. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
person Stefy
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I really loved this fic. It was so original and well-written. Brilliant work! Great Job!