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for No Longer Helpless

by DB2020

person slykitten
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think that this is the best fic on this site. I just don\'t like how unreasonable Harry and Ron are being, i don\'t really see them as being *that* bad. Keep up the good work!
person kurtcouper
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was looking for a good Draco/Hermione story and came up empty handed. Then I spied your lucious fic, not really sure what I was getting into, and wow. Amazing! I\'m so glad I decided to take the plunge. I was first surrounded by less than par one-shots that was filled with unfufilling dialogue. But this story is so refreshing! You write with such passion and the way you describe things...it\'s unlike anything I\'ve ever really read. The plot is extremely thick and twisting, which is completely insane-I love it that way. There\'s so much going on that I can\'t control it. I want to know why Draco\'s on the \"good\" side and I want to know when he\'s finally going to tell her she\'s beautiful. And I\'m so bloody glad for that kiss! What passion. I love how she\'s an angel. It\'s too perfect. For some reason, which is horrible, but I picture a really cheezy Hermione with Michael-like wings coming from her, looking ridiculous. I don\'t know if I read anything about wing span, but just exactly how huge are these? Rediculously small or mamoth sized? Anyway, that was bugging me. Please continue this quickly, I need to know what\'s going to happen soon. I need answers! Any more missions? Maybe some talk between the two? Some more heated passion? Oh, this has to be one of the best DM/HG stories I have read so far. <33KC
person Lily
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome! waiting for more soon! ~Lily
person shell
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter. I\'m holding my breath till some more action comes. lol. This is a great story.
person angel
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow .... draco is her knight in shining armor ..... i cant wait in till next update sooooooooo please update soon and in till then later

angel
person Ailla
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and hope you keep it coming!
person Lily
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amazing story! can\'t wait for more! ~Lily
person Amber
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just love this story! I can\'t wait until Hermione and Draco can finally come together. MORE!
person JerseyGirl
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I anxiously check the computer each day to see if a new chapter\'s been posted. You don\'t get sidetracked and you keep the story moving. It\'s hard to do Hermione-or-Draco-is-part-magical-creature well, but you\'re doing a great job.
person Serentipity01
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is sooooo good! I am going crazy waiting for more chapters to be posted by you (even though you are a nice author and do it so faithfully), that\'s why I keep rereading the ones already there ;) I just love the way you picture the budding relationship between Draco and Hermione, they are just so sweet (without being push-overs). Please continue and keep updating regularly! And thanks for one really amazing story!