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for No Longer Helpless

by DB2020

person Lily
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hope there\'s more soon! :)
person angel
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great i love how kitten told him that they loved each other .... please update soon and in till then keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person Sunny
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeaaaay!!! You continued!!!! Great chapter...Draco is adorable...just keep the chapters coming cuz I love this story!!!
person Kristal
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe its me again!! still lovin the story!!
update ASAP!!!
thnx byes
Kristal
(emails) ^_^
person Sunny
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have just read your story and have to say that I really enjoyed it. You have done a really good job with each of your chapters in terms of slowly but surly developing not only your plot (which is freakin great by the way) but also your characters. I like how they are in love already...but true to their characters are unable or unwilling to admit it even to themselves....the whole \"angelus\" thing, with \"KITTY\" coming out and every now and again is very smart on your part....how you show us Hermione\'s basic nature...her raw self, its great...it reminds me of a veela type story without everything being all neat and tidy...I mean Hermione must slowly come into her power...she must realize it and come to terms with her other self....its pretty deep...How she seems to be two people to draco, but in reality is one and the same, just parts in conflict with each other (or so it seemed to me)....I love the romantic aspect of the story...its great...but I think the entire story overall desires mad applause...I\'m clapping for you right now!!! (I know I\'m a dork)

I understand how college can make it difficult to keep up with other hobbies....I mean what with parties, hanging out, sleeping in, football games, oh yeah and classes...it can be tough....but I really hope you continue because you are very talented and seem passionate about not only this story but improving your talent as a writer in general...and more importantly I love your story and I need you to complete it and not let a faithful reader wait too excruciatingly long for the next update....I\'m pretty sure your other readers will agree!!!
person angel
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man i i love it please more more keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person Kristal
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo!! i wanna know what dracos powers are!!! oo please tell me!!
hehe...wht else is going to happen!! i wanna know everything!! hehe
please update ASAP!!!
hehe
thnx
Kristal
person Kristal
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMF!!! the story is still GREAT!!!!
sorry i havent been reviewing..its that my mother took away the net...so i couldnt come on and read!! hehe
but i still love the story!! hehe
update asap!!!
k thnx bye
Kristal
(emails) ^_^
person killisandra
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like it so far. Can\'t wait for more. Draco seems to really protective of her and i like her attitude with him as well, their personalities are working really well together. That was really cool about the vampires and the missing students. I really liked the descriptions of Mantra Druids. Anyway, i think it\'s going really well and you should keep going with it.
Blessed Be,
~Sandra~
person kurtcouper
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sweet! Draco being a knight in shinning tarnished armor. Remarkable. I truly loved this chapter. I can\'t wait to see what the \"Kitten\" does when she takes over Hermione\'s body. She\'s so inhibited; I\'m sensing trouble! Sometimes the golden trio (- Hermione and + Ginny) are too bloody annoying. Keep up the wonderful work, love. You\'re such a great writer. I was too excited when I found the story already updated for today. <3KC