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for No Longer Helpless

by DB2020

person angel
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dang they were soooooooooooooo close but noooooooooo they had a meeting to go to blast it .. i hope the plane works the why theywould like and i cant wait in till next time in till then keep up hte awesome work ..later for now

angel
person Sunny
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I simply love thisstory...I wait with bated breath for an update....its so damn good....you do an unbelievable job...please update soon I can;t wait to see how they confront each other with their feelings!!!
person JTBJAB
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s so cruel of Moody! But.... I can\'t wait to read what happens when he does confess his love - drunk! Bless him!
person slykitten
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is definately the best story I have seen on this site. I love that everyone is still in character. I think its works much better this way than when everyone is ooc. You are a wonderful writer. Looking forward to the next part.
person angel
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ man moody are you taking lesson from the headmaster or what but true it is about time they tell each other how they feel and man please more write more i cant wait in till then next chapter and in till then keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person Hanna Delacour
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL... that was Moody\'s best chapter yet. This is going to get interesting in a hurry. Can\'t wait for more!
person SlythErin
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ulghhh.... As always you\'ve left me wanting more. Every time you update I try to save it for the end of the day, but it\'s a weakness. I have to click on the link the moment I see it to find out what\'s coming next.

Brilliant as always! I do love to read your work!
person kurtcouper
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. I love this story incredibly too much! The chemistry between Draco and Hermione... How just a look, ugh, I seirously can not say what I want. I love this story. Ron\'s always so annoying. I wish he\'d just get over all his stupid little petty drama. Are the couple going to go on another adventure?
person angel eyes
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the great new chapter :)
person JTBJAB
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh and the plot thickens! Please update again son!