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Oh I can\'t wait! They finally pronounced their love and we know why Draco turned \"good\", if you could ever call a Malfoy good. And I know something dramatic is going to happen during the battle. Eee, <333

Just wanted to drop you another note- I thought the bedroom scene was very tastefully done. It\'s a personal choice, and if you prefer not to write the \"lurve\" scenes, I think that you made a good decision. We still get a lot of the connection from the hints at it and the scenes surrounding the actual event. I think it\'s great that you dealt with it so gracefully. I have been known to write a smut scene or two (or lots) but I often think they wind up detracting from the romance, and I think that you wrote the whole scene beautifully.

Catherine

What a romantic scene- I loved when Draco tells her \"You\'re mine for the taking.\" I\'d be his for the taking...

Seriously- well done- it was very sweet and melancholy when he breaks down at the thought of losing her. Great job!

Yay! Go Hermione!

And damn Order meeting from interrupting Hermione and Draco!!!!

Hehehe.... and that bit with Draco hurting Moody - so subtle - brilliant!

I look forward to your next chapter!

oh yeah! thats what i\'m talking about great chapter keep updating!!!!!!!!!!

hahahaha that was great and now draco we know what made draco change sides man i feel sorry for him ... well now he has mione and they will be there for each other ... i cant wait in till the next chatper and in till then keep up the awesome work ... later for now

angel

That was a brilliant chapter - well done for getting it up so quickly!

Ohhh...two chapters!!! THANK YOU! Oh....missing the bedroom scene...major bummer...not just for the smut either...I mean...what about their *connection*. Was he tender? Was she nervous? Did she trust him completely? Did she cry? Did *he* cry? Even if you are not comfortable with the gory details at least let us into that moment with them...we have waited so long...been so patient. I really hope you reconsider and add to your story...I think that by skipping to the shower scene you are really missing out on an opportunity to show us yet another, deeper dimention of their relationship. I mean...you gave us 30 chapters of really incredible build-up to that scene...then you left us on the outside of the door. Boo Hoo for us. Other than that you are still doing an amazing job and I look forward to reading more...soon I hope!

haha dracos drunk!! and moody is comic! awesome!
update asap..i wanna see if draco goes to hermione drunk and tells her he loves her!!
thnx
Kristal
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p.s.: we\'re both reading Catalyst..isnt it a good story too??!!?

I\'m still working through your older chapters and I am LOVING your Draco. Is it strange that I get jealous of Hermione? I mean, that is to say, er, I have nothing but detached affection for fictional characters. I do NOT get irrationally jealous of Draco.

BUT... if I did, I would be very jealous of yours. Very nicely done. You\'ve put a lot of thought into this and it really shows- I am enjoying it greatly!