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for No Longer Helpless

by DB2020

person Sunny
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a chapter....i love this story...and I am so glad we got to \"see\" the love between them.....Thank you for reading the reviews....you are a great writer and I would have continued to read whether or not you had included the more intimate scenes or not...but I love the fact that you actually read your readers reviews and have responded in kind to their many demands!!! not many would have done so while still remaining true to your story and the characters....this chapter and especially the love scene was written so beautifully...please keep writing I can\'t wait for the next installment!!! Thank you for responding so wonderfully (and so quickly too I might add) to your readers needs!!!!
person angel
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow now there out and they dont have to hide from the order.. i cant wait in till next time in till tne keep up the awesome worka nd later for now

angel
person AZCatFan
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes. Exactly. Thank you.
person Kristal
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey!! 2 chapters!!
why oh why wont you tell me what dracos powers are?? please!!!!!!!!
i wanna know more!!!
keep the updates comming!!
hehe
Kristal
(emails:))
person lilycat
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read your update- that was SO hot! Poor kids- what am I saying- poor me! I was so disappointed for them.

I loved the flashback to the night before- it was one of the cutest things I\'ve ever read. I love the way you\'ve written Draco\'s inner dialogue- it\'s wonderful.

Great chapter!
person lilycat
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
P.S. I LOVE your Draco/Moody interactions. I have never read anything like that before and it is such a great idea- it is really fresh comedic value.
person Sunny
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow so much has happened in these two new chapters..and I love it!!! They confessed their love for each other..the Order is going to strike first..Hermione\'s the bait....its alll so freakin good...I love this story...I know I say it everytime but its true....please please please update soon!!!
person Sunny
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry but I had more to say...umm I have to agree with AZCatFan it was a little sucky that we didn\'t get to a more in depth look at their \"FIRST TIME\"...I mean I loved how you set it up and everything...it was very tastefully done...very cute very sweet...but I wish we could\'ve had a little peak inside that bedroom!!!! Having said that I still absolutley love love love your story and can\'t wait to see how everything works out!!!!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always! Glad to see the couple finally got to work out their frustrations ;)
person Hanna Delacour
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters just can\'t come fast enough... I am glad they are going to take an offensive stance, as it is rare to see that in a fic. Damn Moody for barging in on poor Draco and Hermione, he should pay for that!