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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ... he came for her himself well he must reall like/want her then ...please update soon and in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now
angel
angel
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uncool!
a cliff hanger!!
i want more! u cant do this to me!!!
PLEASE update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
hehe
thnx
Kristal
(emails:))
a cliff hanger!!
i want more! u cant do this to me!!!
PLEASE update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
hehe
thnx
Kristal
(emails:))
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, I really like your story it\'s well put together and thought out and I love the characters. There\'s just one little problem. Your parapraghs are too long and it makes it really hard to read sometimes. I think I\'m only on chappy 13 and it might change in the later chappys but for future reference, remember that a paragraph is actually five or six sentences sometimes less and maybe a little more but not as huge as what you are doing now. But remember you story is really good, \'cause I\'m still reading it and I only read the best. You have great grammar, and again I like how you describe and write about the characters it\'s very good. Thanks for writing the story.
Later,
Bulma
Later,
Bulma
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating! Ron & Harry\'s reaction was spot on! I can hardly wait for the final battle!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a tense chapter - I am dying for the next chapter!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok...I got to chappy sixteen and I saw that you had started the better paragraphing. Thank you *bows*
Keep up the good work!! ^_~
Keep up the good work!! ^_~
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every time there is a new chapter up, it just makes my day! Thanks! I love that Hermione is rapidly developing an \'experimental streak\', so to speak ;) AND I love that you\'re bringing Blain back - stroke of genius, that! Keep it up, You\'re creating something absolutely beautiful here :)
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Blain again! I love Blain! He\'s funny... can\'t wait to see what Draco has in store for the vampires. Anyways, impressed and loving this fic as always!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is building so nicely - I have particularly loved the last three chapters. Starting with Draco\'s drunken declaration, his confession, and the public declaration. I can\'t wait to see where you take this next.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh!!! hurry up and update!!!!!!
i want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please update asap!!
i still want to know what dracos powers are! why havent you elaborated on it yet?
(i finally remembered it when im posting!)
thnx
Kristal
(emails:))
i want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please update asap!!
i still want to know what dracos powers are! why havent you elaborated on it yet?
(i finally remembered it when im posting!)
thnx
Kristal
(emails:))