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for Win At Any Cost

by GreyPenInk

person Kyo-nezumi
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t you dare end it this is interesting please continue
person Noir
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While your writing is good, you lost me half way through. I think you need to go make and explain more of what is going on in the first chapter, because the gun and what not really confused me. I siting here goin, \'What?\' I\'m sure your going to explain everything later about what is going on, but please have mercy and fix this chapter, it is a little to rushed . . .
person moidy
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow loving the story line. im definately interested in what\'s to come please update soon. is harry gonna turn into a girl? i hope not but it would make sense if he did. loving the story so faw can\'t wait for more. ^__^
moidy
person Mare
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s interesting! I\'d say go for it and update!
person Kat
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good, and I really would like to see this story to the end.
person elecktra
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue! I love it! I\'ve never read anything like it before!! I really hope u do continue! Update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please do continue.
person ender
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it!! i would like to see it to be continued!!!
person Minako
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
Now this is cute and serious but a bit funny to me so what is Harry\'s freinds going to say?, or how about win he finds out what happen to him he might be annoyed or try to escape I Hope there would be a bit of Jelousy in it not a lot who knows Draco might like him being his wife. lol. that spell might be a bonding one or a love spell or something they can\'t live with out one another spell...but good luck on this one it cute but srious.

tbc...?
person WynterRose
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please continue!! very intriguing...where do you want to go with it, if you do continue?