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I really hope that you`ll continue this story!!! A good first chapter, by the way!

Why start something if you don\'t have anymore conviction that to finish? Do you need someones elses approval to create. Why not just have some fun and write the best story that you can, so that your happy with it when it does finish? Don\'t worry about the reviews they will come if people are touched by your story and you won\'t have to have your mind distracted by that. There will be enough suggestions as you write to the point that if you aren\'t well decided on a firm storyline it can well make you confused and very well bring you to writer\'s block as I often see happen. Stay true to yourself. As you will see when I give a review, we talk about how you can become a better author, not how I think the characters should act and what should happen in your story. That to me is how a reviewer should hope best to be of genuine help and not cause so much litter in the authors mind that they loose the original direction that they were originally on. On a truly brighter note your story is intriqueing and I am difinitely interested in where you are going with this story.

continue! :)

i say continue... it\'s interesting.. a good beginning i think..

OMG! I love it! I have to say that this story is indeed interesting. I just love dominate Draco, though reading a good dominate Harry once in a while never hurt. I beg you to update as soon as you can. I desperatly wan to know what will happen. If you could, would you send me an e-mail when you update. Please and thank you.

go on, go on