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for Magic Ship of Pleasure

by Leclair

person Chi
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gyaah! More, more! Get him on that cruise already, dammit! This is bloody torture... :D
So, please update soon...
person kaoschan
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hee i can\'t wait to read the reaction once he steps foot on the ship.
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Can\'t wait for chapter 3!
person Dustin
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting. looking forward to see what happens next
person Storm
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far and I can\'t wait to read your update. It has a lot of potential to be something along the lines of \'Boat Trip\' (I loved that movie by the way) but only he\'s not straight. Keep up the good work and update soon hopefully. Oh and I just wanted to tell you that you forgot the word \'lip\' in I think it was like the fifth from last paragraph. it says \'Ron was gnawing on his bottom\'. It was really funny but I figured you meant his lip, however the visual of Ron twisted to chew on his butt was pretty funny. Just figured that I would tell you.
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smile* Oh he is going to kill them. After he thanks them of course! Can\'t wait for chapte 2!
person SyXX
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really love this fic...Please keep it up...
person Alea
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Started out good, so i hope youll update soon!
person bekki
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooo kool! nice start, ill deff be following this... update soon