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for Closer

by extseventeen

person bookwormsrule
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
W o w.
person angeldust
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this story was pretty good, but it would have been cooler if ron and hermione really would have been freaking lol
person lovingharry
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked the beggining and then it sort of turned into a rush and the part about hermione and ron being in her room was good...until you said that they were studying that was very very corny, u need practice keep trying
person Jessica
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, Ginny is wicked! haha i lyk it
person Saico
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It began okay, but the end was too rushed. You need to practice more.
person Carter_SG1
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute smutty first fic. That Ginny, she\'s as devious as the twins!
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the part leading up to the smut, but then the writing style seemed to change completely and it just became sort of rote sex.
person Narcissa Black
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I\'ve never heard of someone\'s cock being referred to as a unit before. I thought units were what one took in university in order to graduate. What would that make Randy Johnson? Of course, now that I think about the The Big Unit\'s name, maybe I\'ve been missing something all these years.