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by CelticCross83

person Hambares
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Snape is so cruel. But Harry didn\'t seem to mind.....
person Katharos
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. The sex scene was great, and the black, french knickers were a nice touch. I can\'t wait to see what you have planned for Hary\'s other two detentions.
person antipyro
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly hot - French black panties!!! - I never knew Severus was into cross dressing, or Harry for that matter.

You must give us some more background -- Did Harry have other gay relationships? Did Harry know he was gay? Severus hadn\'t had any other stimulation in months - what was he stimulated from before?

Or nevermind those questions, just give us more detentions.

Please, if you don\'t get as many reviews as you want, email me and I\'ll gloat and praise all you want.

HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT!
person slytherin lady
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes please write the others.
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man this is really really hot

please post more
person penny
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was, . . *drools* . . Come on you HAVE to post detention 2 and 3. I may die if you don\'t!

That was a really awesome chapter and i really do hope you post again.
person Ruby
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I fricken loved it! You absolutely have to write the other two or I think I\'ll die! PLEASE! PLEASE WRITE THEM!
Ruby Cold
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad Snape ! *smirk*

Please update soon !!! ^-^
person kari
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update!!!!!!!!!!
Update!!!!!!!!!!
person Neko Miu
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo I hope you do post the next two detentions, it was hot ^ - ^