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for Discipline

by CelticCross83

person Jade
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic continue contiuew thiers got to be a plot in here somewhere u just have to find it!!!!
come on u know u wana

Jade
person fageel mouth
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i dont even like snape and that was still hot please write more
person reba
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, I like it. PLeeeeease write the other detensiont, too. How about detension for snape? GRIN Reba
person RowanNightwish
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do continue, sorry bout your hands, by the way, I won\'t hound you *too* badly about fast updates...lol
person me
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I like, I like! Harry in Girly panties!
person Lioncourt
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To but it lightly, I wouldn\'t mind an update at all. Or ten updates for that matter.
person lindy
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please, please please. It was over far far too soon
person PirateDucky
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like! The French panties were amusing to think about. Please continue!
person sailor_chaos
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Sorry about your hands. I understand that it\'ll take a while to get the 1st sequel up but I would like a sequel because this one-shot was great! A sort-of non-con and with slight bdsm. I hope your other two are just as good.
person jean
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
by all means take care of your hands and then please tackle the next two detentions.
this was very nice. SS was fully in character and i can see him actually having this secret
reaction to HP. ?-why was HP in women\'s french undies? there has to be a story that goes
with those--and the butterbeer perhaps? just wondering.