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Glad you left an AN saying you hadn\'t stopped writing. I had given this story up as abandoned. Writer\'s block is a hell of a pain so good luck. I\'m waiting for the update and now I am curious as to this note you alluded to in the AN

first two chapter were good

I was a big fan of your story when it was posted the first time. Reading it again I saw some of the old stuff was still there. I think it\'s awsome how your keeping semi-close to the older version but with the new descriptions and everything. I can\'t wait to read the next part. Good luck with the writers block, it truly is a writers worst enemy and not publishers like everyone thinks. ^ - ~

Hope your writers block disapers soon, waiting for more.
Like this one, there HP is not so woulnrebel

Lika

Oh My Goodness. I love the new chapters. Especially the introduction to draco, very well done. I did like the additions in detail, especially the cab driver, he was really funny. can\'t wait for the next chapter.

Hi Ty. Pretty good. Questions though. Is Draco still Harry\'s mate? Will Harry be the more dominate partner (say yes please!)? Will you do mpreg(Draco, not Harry)? Look forward to the new changes although I did like the previous version as well.

Great story. Can\'t wait to see what is coming next.

*smile* Bring on chapter 3!

um....WTF, mate? I loooooooved the story.

I trust you as an author though, and I\'m sure that this version will be just as good. I just miss all the chapters. Oh, the chapters. How lovely they were.

keep it up pleeease.

Let me just say I enjoyed the first version of Secret Keeper (hey, I kept reading it as long as you updated), but I think practice has improved your style and tightened your plot (so far as I can tell with just two revised chapters--I like the cab ride). I am eagerly waiting for chapter three. However I do have one (teeny) quibble: you describe Draco\'s face as being both softer and more angular. I think those two terms may be mutually exclusive. What exactly is softer? His jaw, his nose? Surely not his cheekbones... Sorry, I\'m a stickler for precise langauge. Please keep writing. Sincerely, CRS