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very good so far please finish it soon

You may consider this story finished, but I do not. Even without looking at the comments of other reviewers, I\'ll be willing to wager that many agree with me. Please, write a real ending to this story. The other elemental mage, who is it. Hermoine needs to find out that Harry\'s magic has not only healed her, but that she has already conceived. The \'punishmrnt\' of Percy and Hermione\'s father. The destruction of Moldyshorts. The reactions of Mrs. Granger. These and other things need to be addressed in order for this ro be considered a completed story.

u know im saying the truth this story makes no sense, i cant belive you publised it!! and why am i answering to ur stupid ass? well i think you deserve to be insulted, because this story insults all of harry potter fans everywhere!! come to hell with me i could use company you know :D dont bother writing me back, cause im not going to come back here to read it and answer you back, im just taking the time to tell you that.

and just so you know...i know u better than you think...just think of who i am and youll know...

dont listen to angel dust! shes lying!! you are a good writer and and i want you to know i enjoyed your story very very much! continue to write fan fiction and just forget what they say about you, you dont have to listen to anything you dont want to listen to, keep writing im rooting for you -hugs- ^_^ :D

go to hell angel dust

you idiot!
the power that harry has that voldemort doesn\'t is LOVE!
ALTHOUGH, if you wantes, you could say that harry heard the prophecy wrong and it says powerS!
(p.s. - neville is air, isn\'t he? \'cause the prophecy COULD have applied to him!)

oh, and i forgot - i love the story!
please continue! (soon)

oh, and don\'t you have to be a wizard/witch to be a death eater?

well i can see why you havent had any reviews for this story, even if you did publush 11 chapters, i stopped reading this story at chapter 5 because it was all getting so corny and stupid, face it the plot is stupid everything about this stupid story is stupid, somethings can be really sweet and stuff but this is just nonsense. you should really go to fanfiction . net instead of here, and publish a story there maybe you will get some credit for it over there.

get the plot straight and dont write such nonsense.

1. dumbledore doesnt have any say if hermione can stay at harry\'s house

2. the dursleys barely let harry get out of the house and much less if he has someone over, they dont really care.

3. harry wouldnt make such a show about liking hermione

4. do you really think that dumbledore would really drag his butt over to privet drive to go get them when he could have sent a letter in notice?

5. do you think that lupin would get so aggrvated about harry fucking hermione, i dont think he would care less, he doesnt look like the type of guy to really make a show about things and treaten to kill harry just by having sex with hermione, give me a break that has to be your stupidest one yet.

6. ron getting in a fist fight with harry saying that her going to kill him and ginny acting so bitchy to harry, telling him to get out, i dont think that she would but thats what you seem to think.

7. i cant tell you anything else because thats all i managed to read but i think that you have enough critizing from your story so why do you bother to publish any chapters anyway if no one even review the story? you only have one measely review and thats mine, frankly i have no hope for this story at all.

the plot os stupid and for your info theyve published harry potter and the half blood prince already so why dont you add somethings from there or something cause all you wrote in this story is so old fashion and i think that its stupid and you should really take this story off the website if you dont want me to go and flame ur butt again.

p.s..I HATE THIS STORY!!!!!!!