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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have read all 11 chapter i enjoyed them greatly i love your story so much and am looking forword to reading more
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG Love it love it have to update soon ! You capture the characters so well in your writing. you are easliy seen as a very talented writer !! Great story and hope to read more soon !!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok im mad Angledust go fuck your self you have no right to flame peple if you havent written a story !! it just shows how immature and childish you are !! and if you have nothing better to do go read HP4 and stop harrassing this author because your review mean nothing to to him/her so fuck off !!!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey R.A.B....I know there are some people out there that do not like your story and I know you are demoralize by them but let me tell you this,beeing human,it is natural but do follow what your heart tell you no matter what other says. Each individual\'s mindset is different and im sure you know that there are some out there who like your story.For all you know,it could change someone life for the better. I must stress on the word FANFICTION and im sure that everyone knows what it means. There are worst story out there that holds no meaning.I support you all the way even if you do not continue the story but please do continue the story untill you end it.
=people make mistakes but they make a bigger one if they don\'t learn from it=
remember that.
=people make mistakes but they make a bigger one if they don\'t learn from it=
remember that.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really great storyline when are you going to put the next chapter up i cant wait to find out what happens, youve done really well you should be proud
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fucking awesom dude. you should consider your self as a loved and cherished memeber of an adult lititer club.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it why cant u make more it was the best i LUV IT, I LUV IT plz end it i need more cos its soooo good
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I\'m going to give your fic a shot, but you shold consider yourself lucky. If you cannot even title your chapters with proper grammar or spelling, how am I to appreciate your fic?
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really injoyed this story please con. i would luike to know what they can do with these new powers and who the thrid person is. Please have a little more romance3 if u can those parts draw readers for everybody likes a good romantic scean. I hope my review does not upset u and i hope u con. this story for i wil most deffently con. reading it
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story i love the plot keep it up. if you want i can go back through and correct the spelling in the other chapters for you. get back to me on that i hope to hear from you.