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August 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM
The story is great, I feel the hostility from Lupin towards harry shouldn't be there seeing the fact that Lupin was friends with Harry's father. Other than that the story is solid, and it would be great if you finished it. Best of luck thinking up new chapters.
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May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am afraid a lot of things don't make sense to me in this story. I like your take on things but by no means does the story sound finished. I must say I think that Lupin, Ron, and Ginny are out of character. I like the story don't get me wrong. If you continue the story let me know. I will even help you come up with Ideas for it if you wish. For the record, I have read all 7 books and Dumbledore only guesses the power that Harry has is love, and it could very well be ancient magic instead.
The Devils Advocate,
Hedwigseyes
The Devils Advocate,
Hedwigseyes
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so im loving the story so far .. i especially like the plot twist with Mione's father qur question im waiting to see answered is is a for real asshole nasty guy or is he under a curse and if he is under a curse will they figure that out before harry goes off the deep end and slaughters him for what he has done to Mione??
keep it up
keep it up
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely great work. Each chapter is better than the one before. Keep up the great work. Very creative and worthwhile read.
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story.. i know you havent writen since 05' but if u ever continue it please let me know.
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More please i love this story MORE!!!!! ooo and as for angeldust forget you ok this is a good book why dont u read past chapter 5 and then come back and comment .
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story! Are you going to be adding more, i want to know what happens. Like who has the 4th power. Thanks
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More chapters or a sequel. Please more.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. I really hope you continue it and i hope the next chapter comes out soon!!!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have read all 11 chapter i enjoyed them greatly i love your story so much and am looking forword to reading more