rate_review Reviews

Hehe! This sounds SO promising. And very well written, too. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I luuuuv it when SS/HG starts out hating each other...

great story. update soon!!!:-)

I really like the look of this story, i hope you keep at it!

by chance do you do emails to notify people when you update? sorry bit lazy, i just don\'t want forget about this story

Excellant, absolutely excellant!

Glad you are ignoring HBP - and i hope you update soon!

Love the story so far. Please keep it going. I can\'t wait to see where this goes.

Can\'t wait for an update. I really like this first chapter, it\'s always fun when they start off hating each other. Don\'t let them fall in love to quickly if that is the way you intend to go. I can see you having some fun with this one!

Awesome! This story is how do you say it? Charming? yes, it is witty to boot. I like how i read through the entire chapter and not one part was boring. your style of writing and ability to keep characters in character kept the plot moving at a good pace while still allowing you to understand every word of it. now, if i may - ahem:

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Hee heee, immature enough for ya? sorry, couldn\'t resist!

Well begun is half done, isn\'t that the saying? I like your first chapter, and I hope there\'s more than one to follow!

It\'s good, if simple, which isn\'t entirely bad. I would definitely like to read more when you get it up.

Ch 1 - very nice first chapter! I hope Severus gets to eat soon - he\'s too skinny to miss any more meals. Very cute trick, to befriend Dobby! Do I dare ask if Harry and Ron survived the war too? Looking forward to updates!