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for Survival of the Fittest

by Looneyluna

person Pastel
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to read the next chapter. This is a great story. Update soon please.
person lemonade
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can definitely see the possibilities of humor in this!! Very funny. Pissed off Snape always cracks me up.
person loola
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fantastic, cant wait for an update!
person Stormi
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need more. Wondeful chapter, keep up the great work.
person bellasol
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story! I can totally picture Hermione standing on the desk, pointing her wand at Snape and fixin\' to hex him good! I can hardly wait to see what torture Dumbledore devises for our duo! Looking forward to your next update.
person KatelynXM
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yaaaay you posted more.. i love this story so much, funny and well written. i like how i havent seen a snape pov, and how its kept to hermione and dumbledore, cuz severus\'s actions are lot more funny and meaningful when his thoughts are shown. dont know why. u good writer. sev and hermione 4evah! did i mention that you captured dumbledore perfectly also?
person KatelynXM
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry typo, on above review, i mena aren\'t not are. me likey story will u post more soon pleez?
person firewall
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated! and so quickly. LOL I can just see them going at it in the library...Mme Pince would have a hissy fit! Thanks for sharing your story...hope the next chapter comes as quickly!
person cherie
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! It is so funny and I can not wait to see what happens!
person Me
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great start. You have a really good writing style, and your story flows well - I look forward to more! ^_^