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for Survival of the Fittest

by Looneyluna

person Jess m. c.
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the BEST fic I\'ve read. I hope you continue to write more chapters. You\'re story is truely original and entertaining. I skipped my class to finish reading the last few chapters. I just got home and had to send you a review. Please Please Please Can you email me anytime you update this story. It\'s really hard to find a story that is this interesting. Please email me so i can continue to read this story.

Jessica
person nesscafe
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That rat bastard!!! I totally don\'t blame Hermione for the book bashing or the elbowing. If he\'s not carefull, he\'s going to loose a testicle. Miserable jerk! Doesn\'t he get it? Even Dumbledore told him. She fancies him and he\'s being and idiot. I wouldn\'t blame her all for getting revenge. I look forward to it. Love the story btw! ;cD
person nesscafe
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
P.S. I hear ya on the nervous part. I live in Tampa myself. Where ever you are I hope you\'re safe.

Ness,
person ElizabethJade
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I lovvvvveeee this story!!!!! Please keep it coming!
person saigo
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love to watch them fight. Plz update soon.
person firewall
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha! I\'m glad that you were able to post again. (It\'s turning out to be a nasty hurricane season this year. I hope you stay safe.) What a great chapter. I\'m glad that Dumbledore interrupted...Severus would only have regretted manipulating Hermione in the end...then again, he\'s a Slytherin so probably not. Hahahaha. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. Thanks again for sharing.
person Jenn
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This starting to become quite intriguing. I am enjoying this, please post again soon.
person JTBJAB
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, from the title of the chapter I knew that was going to happen, but reading it I was still on the edge of my seat!

I hope Hermione forgives him, then they can get down to business ;-p
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let me start out by telling you how much I enjoy your story!!! That is what is so great about this site(AFF.net); there are so many variations and interpretations of these rich characters! Whether I want to read a lovely, funny piece about Snape or a darkly forbidding story they are all here! I wholly applaude all the authors for their diverse works! Such is the joy of writing that you can infuse your own uniqueness to the stories you write- even with borrowed characters! OK sorry, once again I have reverted to rambling. Apologies. I really do look forward to your updates and hope to see many more! Happy writing and I\'ll try not to ramble so much in the future- I can\'t promise, but I\'ll try! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs and kisses!
Killer K ;)
person redlady27
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I must admit they are both acting like children at times. I hope they come to an understanding and realize they both fancy each other and get on with the snogging. *grins*