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for Survival of the Fittest

by Looneyluna

schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Good Chapter! I am completely seething! I can\'t wait to see what happens next! I can\'t believe she just left him there! I am so glad that one of your people came out with no major damage to their home. Now there\'s Rita. My mother lives about 50 miles outside of Houston, so I am keeping my fingers crossed that everything will be ok. They haven\'t called for an evacuation where she is yet, so maybe that is a good sign.... Anyway... Love the story, love the new chapter... Anxiously waiting for more!
person KAL
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THATS NOT GOOD UPDATE SOON
person Anon
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I can\'t believe she just left him like that.....it\'s obvious he wants her more than what he\'s saying, but i guess one can be blind like that. I can\'t stand cliff hangers, but I suppose it keeps the curiousity stewwing, Please update soon! ~Joani
person lemonade
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I am actually glad she snuck away. It would have been too sudden of a change for her to just give in to Albus and Snape. Snape doesn\'t get sympathy yet because he hasn\'t told her how he feels. Keeps me wondering how he\'ll deal with it.
person amsev
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely tension watching two very stubborn characters throw sparks off each other. I\'m almost starting to feel sorry for Albus as he wonders if Sev and Hermione will ever bury the hatchet.

I hope all is going smoothly with your aiding victims of the hurricane. Thank God for folks like you that are on the spot, there and able to help. All those people without homes made me think of my parents when they were forced to leave their home and come to the U.S. after WWII. My prayers are with you and the people of Louisiana.
person Cheryl
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Amazing! Excellent! My absolute favorite yet. You really have a wonderful, easy-to-read style that just flows and keeps readers interested. The tension and humor is wonderful, and you\'ve captured the characterizations fabulously. I know you are busy with more important things right now but hopefully you won\'t keep us waiting too long and we can see what Dumbledore thinks about the turn of events!! Thanks for your efforts. I hope to see more stories from you.
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was amazing..lol. Well, I just hope that you updade soon, maybe you can find some time even in between your work. I\'ll be patiently avaiting your next update :)
person Ms_Figg
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this. Very funny, very tension filled ... I couldn\'t wait for the consummation. Have added this to my recommended reading list. Looking forward to the next update. Bless you for your work with those who have been displaced by Katrina. Heaven has a special place for people like you.
person cat
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
take all the time you need, its a better cause than sating our desires as a fan, i love your work this was a very good chapter i throughly enjoyed it finally they got it on ^_^ please update as soon as you have a chance, thanks
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been enjoying your story, it has been providing me with an escape.
I am from Louisiana and would like to say thank you for your help with the Katrina victims.