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for Mary Sue Comes to Hogwarts

by TCardan

person Satan
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVILLLLL!! EVILLLL CLIFFY!! shame on you! that was like..the hottest part lol! damn right im lookin forward to the next chapter, there better be some hardcore sex there and dont keep us waitin too long!
person Dreamweaver
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it. I wonder if Mary Sue knows what she is in for. Then again, once she\'s out from under their spell, will they have as much control over her as they like to think. It\'s in her nature to flirt, she won\'t be able to stop it on their say so. Can\'t wait to see where this leads too. :)
person Allison
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing & hot story! I always wondered what would happen if someone accidentally leaned on that barrier and you have made it into a great plot line. Since I have seen your story about Blaise I can\'t wait to read it when Mary Sue and Blaise get it on!
person Cyn
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic....hilarious yet kinky....love the mix....must update sooner....can\'t wait to see what Mary Sue does with the boys next....-Cyn
person ZOMG
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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I do believe i will have to kill you now...
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Oh wow....woo... Heh. *tries to compose self but fails miserably* Oh god. Please continue this. And fast. I need more! *gasps* *pants* *passes out*
person LCDrusilla
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I very much like an evil Mary Sue, it makes me want to write one of my own. Where ever did you come up with the idea of a vixen like her? I\'m not too sure though that I like Harry and Ron being fooled so easily. Boys are dumb and think with other things that aren\'t their brains but.... well this is your story so you are allowed to take certain liberties. By the by I think it would be fantastic to see Hermione get in on it, especially if she were to start screwing around the Blaise and Draco\'s heads.
person Elexies
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this story so much. I love how you portray Mary-Sue and the humor is very well done. The smut is perfect. But what I\'d really like to see more of is more Mary-Sue/Ginny action. I think the way she\'s corrupting all the boys would be even more fun for a rather innocent Gryffindor girl. Just an opinion. Still, keep up the great work, I\'m looking forward to your next update!

~Elexies
person lorett
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OY SO FUNNY!

SHAME ON MARY SUE! What a crazy girl. Can\'t wait to see the antics she ensues upon...no pun intended.

AND, PLEASE, PLEASE, I\'m BEGGING YOU, don\'t forget about Draco and Blaise! They need some fun too.

Cheers,

L
person Dreamweaver
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant stuff. All that slow teasing was just delicious. ;) I don\'t know if I could have gone to sleep after that. LOL