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for Mary Sue Comes to Hogwarts

by TCardan

person Sorceress14
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I loved the Blaise and Draco thing, it was soooo hot! Too bad they ddin't do anything with each other *blushes*. I didn't really enjoy the Pansy thing but I think her personality is good. You're right, she is always just a jealous vindictive bitch. I think the new Pansy is good but I can tell you, I be skipping any lesbian sex scenes... I hope there is at least a little more Blaise and Draco tp cum (pun intended)! See you then and happy writing!
person Alleycat
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I looooooooove it! Pansy as bi....I love that too. can't wait for some girls only action. update soon. ^_^
person SeductionsClaim
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....very nice!
person Sorceress14
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squee* That was soooooo perfect! (no pun intended) This story is totally awesome! Anyway, I promise not to throw my breakfast at you if tou include a little Draco/Blaise slash! Even a kiss will suffice. Please!!!!! You never see any it anymore and I didn\'t get any presents for my birthday! Oh, I\'ll stop whining now. Anyway, I loved it and I just can\'t wait to see what happens next! Update soon, your highness! *bows down to the queen of all fanfiction*
person jadecorrine
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Suck Merlin\'s cock!\" has to be the best expletive i\'ve ever heard(read, i guess)!

This story looks fun, but to be a true MS you need much more description of her cascading golden tresses and mood-changing eyes and trendy outfits. Anyway, i\'m enjoying it. Keep writing!
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*groans* So unfair! How could you just leave us like that?! Gah!!!! Great chapter. Amazing. I can\'t wait to read what happens next and what will go on with the Gryffindors. The only way I will forgive you for the cliff ending is if you don\'t take another month to update with a new chapter.
person Alleycat
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you mean thing you! The minute I\'m all excited and you pop a cliffy in front of me! *pouts* Oh well, it was sucha hott chapie,please don\'t leave it there to long. I need my Lemon!

^_^
person lilycat
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I never know what to expect from you! This is such a funny, silly idea and it is cracking me up. The little comments about Hermione are what really put the situation into sharp relief- I can only imagine her annoyance with all of the males she encounters going totally nuts over \"Miss Perfect.\"

Humor aside, I am now lusting after Draco and Blaise in a bad way. The way you\'ve written them is SO sexy. It sounds like our little Mary Sue may be getting in over her head with these two. Good for her.

I will be watching this story!
person CaptainSolo
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! More! More!
person Allison
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mary Sue MUST find a way to play more card games with the Gryffindors! I mean, her with these two will be great in the next chapter or so but the others certainly won\'t give her up and I don\'t want them too! Keep going, this is fun!

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