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for Mary Sue Comes to Hogwarts

by TCardan

person Mukkahai
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful stuff so far. Every step of the way, you've demonstrated a certain flair for cliffhangers. On one occasion, your A/N sounded as though you felt guilty for it, but rest assured, you're good at it. Nobody minds good cliffhangers, I don't think. It's the lousy ones that can be spotted from several pages off that usually bug me. The ones that read like a movie they've already started writing the sequel to...those bug me. You know how to work them, though. But be warned...producing a cliffhanger without following up on it can be dangerous. Packs of rabid fanboys and fangirls clawing at your door, chanting an ultimatum of "Porn or blood"...it's not a pretty picture! And so it is strictly with your safety in mind that I ask you, please, to give us another chapter soon.
person Paul
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story line. Can't wait to see if she gets found out by the staff or manages to make it thru the year.
person Loke
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hee hee hee. i usually dont like mary sue's, but i think that you admit that she is a mary sue character is making me like it. Ooh i can't wait to see what you do with Harrys lessons!
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read several of your stories and enjoy them very much. Please continue. Your stories are very exciting and I am sorry I've never told you how much I enjoy them before. Please forgive me. By the way "What a Witch Needs" was absolutely fabulous and "Mary Sue Comes to Hogwarts" has the makings to be just a awesome. By the way I love this Pansy!
person Ryan
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story soon, I find that it has caught my fancy and my obsessive personality wont let me forget about it.
person KarenElhyam
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story so far. I absolutely adore Mary Sue's character. She's so frivilous and sexy, but she's not a total bimbo and that's a nice surprise. You have a knack for writing likable, sexy female characters, and I respect that, because it's hard to do. Keep up the good work!
person Dreamweaver
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say, I love all your stories, my dear. So pleased to be back and reading them again. :)
person Cat
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious!!!!! I love it. Mary Sue is a great character. I thought she might just be a dumb slut, but was pleasantly surprised to find she actually has a personality. Keep it up. Any possiblity of a permanent pairing with one of the Hogwarts boys? Or perhaps one of the hogwarts girls? (evil snicker)
person isha
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is ron eventually gunna fall 4 hermoine?
person amberxscene
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have no idea how long i've been waiting for an update!
i can't wait for her time with Harry.
update as soon as you can!

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