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Awwww, Petal, you've GOT to continue this. PLEASE!! I love the cheekiness of this story. The whole concept of poking fun at Mary Sue stories. I ADORE the fact that you named her Mary Sue Perfect. The whole story is very clever, her being a muggle, the boys doing everything in their power to keep her there. I love that she's a nympho. We get to read about lots of yummy sex with everyone, and no angsty journey to get there. It's a nice refreshing, satirical (sp) change. And yet, there is still a plot. Suprisingly enough. LOL. I love your style of writing, I'm currently reading all your works. I fell in love with WAWN, and its sequel. I wouldn't mind waiting ages for updates for another sequel, its that good. ^.^ You definately have a way with commanding your readers attention that way love. Anyways, I must know the conclusion to this story. Ooh, I love that she helped Neville. He hardly ever "gets any", and not only did Mary Sue pop his cherry, she taught him how to please women, and how to be sexy and flirty for Susan. Do we at least get to read about ONE night with each of the boys? That would be yummy, and I agree, Draco/Blaise threesomes are very yummy. And yes, I appreciate the fact that Pansy didn't go all pyscho crazy on Mary Sue, and how she wanted her too....Nice change. Everyone hates poor Pansy, and she always gets "fucked", so I was glad to find her a bit more likeable in this story. Anywho, can't wait to read more, I will leave you a proper review on the other stories when I am not rushed. I almost read WAWN in one day, but when it got to be about 4 am, AFF did their daily update thingy, so I just went to sleep and finished it in the AM, LOVED it by the way!! XXOO

Wow, this was so totally amazing! I can't believe I read the entire thing so fast. I totally love your use of the Mary Sue thing...it's hilarious and awesome. I hope you continue writing soon, I can't wait to see where you take this next.

I love your story, and look forward to the next update!

Harry is going to have more trouble from Slythering, if Draco and Balsie find out about his private lessons.

What will happen when people fin out that she has no magical powers? Will it be Hermione that unmasks her? Hermione is so jealous I don

I love this!! I was a little skeptical at first, the plot seemed a little far fetched. But I'm hooked! You write beautifully. I can't wait for the next chapter. Although I am sad she's becoming hesitant towards my two favorite Slytherins. Blaise and Draco... mmmm. I'm looking forward to Harry next! Keep it up!

UPDATE NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW

ha. pwease.

Love this fic!!!! You really must update. It's been far to long!!!!!

OH MY GOD!!! You have to update this story, please please please! It's the bet Mary Sue story I've ever read. All I'm asking for is one chapter maybe even a teaser. Please don't forget about this wonderful story.

i ab so lute lee love this story. Lol even though mary sue is a pretty ginormus slut i still love her because she is a sweet heart. Its not her fault she is a nympho. lol update soon..ill be waiting anxiously

what!!! this cant be the end!! please please please update soon!!!

this is my favorite fic plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!