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for Mary Sue Comes to Hogwarts

by TCardan

person Catpower
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very fun. I\'ll look out for the next chapter, definately.
person Narcissa Black
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, clearly I am prejudiced when it comes to your writing, but I thought this was great. Last night I was reading \"A Typical Draco/Harry Story\" which was just over the top. Every little cliche in the book, and the author\'s commentary just part of the story. I almost wet meself. In other words, I think you could take this as far as you can.
person Huh
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually am enjoying this. Usually I hate Mary-Sue\'s, can\'t stand them. But this is actually interesting and enjoyable. You make it obvious she\'s a slut but it\'s more fun that she\'s making guys fall all over her than annoying. She may be a slut and Lady Perfect, but she seems more solid than the usual Mary Sues. I\'m impressed, I\'d actually like to see more, and I hope you keep this up.

~Elexies
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Peaches! LOL Oh you have to keep this going, pretty please. I can\'t wait to see how (and who) Mary Sue does. LMAO
person Derek
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The thing I like the most about your writing is your ability to make me laugh. I am of course a fan of yours from your other series, and you have this ability to make me actually Laugh Out Loud when I am reading your work. I actually came to the site today to check and see if your other fiction was updated when I found this one and was happily surprised. Keep up the good work, peaches.

Derek

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