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for Mary Sue Comes to Hogwarts

by TCardan

person Emmy
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is classic. This story is just too hilarious and great to not continue reading and writing. I was a ltitle weary at first, but you\'ve got me hooked. It\'s on my list that I keep of fics that I am watching and waiting not so patiently for updates of. So keep up the great work and update soon. I can\'t wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter. And more risque scenes like you promised.

Cheers.
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was *hilarious*!! However, the writing is far too nicely executed to make me fully believe I\'m reading a Mary Sue. ;) I loved the detail of Draco\'s list! This is one Mary Sue I\'ll be reading...
person harpling
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, that was really funny. i love the name, too. not exactly believable, but that\'s not the point, is it? this is gonna be good!
person Catpower
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Suck Merlin
person Narcissa Black
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great galloping gargoyles, she\'s going to cause a spot of trouble, isn\'t she? I daresay that Blaise and Draco will help too. The only thing that the boys of Slytherin and Gryffindor can agree on. LOL
person 1701
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I couldn\'t explain it if I tried...but this is SO HOT.

You\'ve got yourself another fan, Petalsoft :).
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry\'s last line was a classic. Right down to the timing. LMAO. I love how you\'ve portrayed Seamus - I imagine him to be exactly that way too. ;) And it\'s nice to see Neville having a bit of fun too. I love your sense of humour, Petal, I can\'t wait to see what happens next. BRAVO!!
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
looks like im not the only one that loves everything you write..yet another story where i can NOT wait for the next chapter!! good job!!
person blubba
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol. i like.
person Dragon34
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. It\'s just amazing how a girl can twist guys around her little finger.

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